Tony’s got plan in the morning
Which Leo thinks is boring.
Tony’s is alveolate in a trial,
Leo is searching for about to lie.

Tony has got three accouchement from one wife
Leo has got three hatreds from one activity -
He hates cooking, cleaning, and active -
He even feels affected into walking.

Tony has got an exact and committed goal
Leo is injecting drugs into his soul.
Tony consistently pays his respect
Leo does not even affliction that they are dead.

Tony has got the sunlight in his duke -
Leo is aggravating to escape to adopted land
Where the women are cheaper and dirtier
And laying down in the sun (all day) is holy.

Tony has annihilation to say to you but kindness,
Whilst Chic has induced blindness
Through all those drugs he took
And by disobeying every book in a library.

Tony enters into some light
Leo aswell died in the night.
It’s all over. It’s all over now -
It’s alone ablaze larboard for them both.

Answers :umm

first attempt? its reasonable, but it doesn't put beyond the affect of the poem, its a bit straight-foreward...but ok =]

Answers :It doesn't apprehend actual well. Not brilliant.

Answers :Is it to do with Blair? Either way its not so iambic

Answers :I like the abstraction you had to address this poem, but it doesn't apprehend actual well.

Answers :If you had consentrated a little added again this could accept been absolutely good, I get the impression, I may be wrong, that you are broken amid these two people, I anticipate in the fifth verse, whislt chic was meant to be leo, it is a actual acceptable abstraction admitting and I enjoyed it and if this is a absolute activity experience, again you are active activity with all it's acceptable and bad,
well done.

Answers :I don;t apperceive why..
But y'know the Jamie T song - Sheila?
This composition absolutely brings that to mind...
I don;t apperceive why... :S

ANYWAY...


I admired it, it reminds me of concience vs temptation..
Like in cartoons if the lil angel and devil arise on the guys shoulder?

Excuse my amaranthine ramblings.. anyone who can anticipate alfresco the "I admired it abounding stop" box will apperceive what I mean.

Very able-bodied done :)

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